Procrastination First Draft

Here is the first draft of my short film "Procrastination". I am very happy with the way this turned out and there are only a few alterations that I feel like I need to make (Some of which I already have done). It took me a total of 4 days to film and over 2 weeks to edit, using multiple editing techniques and I am very happy with how it turned out. However there are still changes that I need to make, such as putting in an opening title and closing credits, and altering certain sound effects which is where the majority of the problems come from, as well as changing certain shots.

Production Update - 11/12/2013

I have finished filming and editing the first draft of my short film and I will be bringing it in tomorrow to see how I can improve it for a next draft.

Production Update 03/12/13

I have nearly finished my film, I have only one day left of filming planned and that is the green screen scene, and I am hoping that I can film this scene on friday (provided that I remember my camera and tripod). I have already editied the scenes that I have filmed, some shots don't work and will most likley need to reshoot after Christmas.